these are the Comments made for my story
Your story is almost completely written as a report to the reader. We do not see the characters doing the things you/the narrator tells us they are doing. Describe Estellas design. Show Sanders theft. Dont leave it for the narrator to tell us they did these things. Also, we dont see the main character growing and changingit is other people, another employee who exposes the theft. Why have you made your central character without personal agency? These aspects need to be changed and reworked. The background of French fashion industry in the 1970s need to be researched, if needed, to make the setting realistic. Proofread carefully for sentence level errors.
