This is your speech to evaluate (link below) that is with You Tube that is rough

This is your speech to evaluate (link below) that is with You Tube that is roughly 7-9 minutes in length.
You may want to use the Speech Evaluation Form attached to guide you as you watch the speech. DO NOT SEND THIS TO ME – IT IS JUST FOR YOU TO USE IN EVALUATING THE SPEECH. ALL I WANT IS YOU 1000-1200 WORD CRITIQUE OF THE SPEECH.
You must watch this speech and then write a 1000-1200 word critique of the speech. You may watch the speech more than once.
video link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qq_lzlXlPWo
please use simple language,